bullying on Venus

Author's Note: I wrote about this short story because this is a good story that he wrote and it was my best choice to write about.

Imagine being on a world where you rarely see the sun; you claim to remember what the sun looks like. The sun comes out every eight years and she remembers what it looks like; “I think the sun is a flower that only blooms for one hour; a penny; like a fire in a stove. I know the author thought, what if a human moved from Earth to Venus and the sun rarely came out and it always rained? Because he knew it that type of an idea had never been done before.

If someone was saying that they knew what the sun looked like or when it was going to come out of the clouds, no one should believe they are either lying or just guessing and not listen to them or at least take it into consideration. She is locked in a closet because of her memories she is locked into a closet while the sun comes out for the first time in eight years. If that did happen to someone everyone else would regret it later.

The sun only comes out every eight years and for one hour only; a short time for viewing the sun. If it was like that on earth we would need a lot more sun or we would need to take vitamin D instead. If it did rain for eight years straight Venus would be flooded because if it did not stop raining for eight years life would be on Venus. If they didn’t get sun in every eight years it would be a nightmare because it would keep raining nonstop and you would never be able to see the sun and have a break to the nonstop raining.

If there was life on a different planet just like this it would be unlikely because you couldn’t plant crops or raise cows. If the sun appeared rarely you would never be able to plant crops for food; you couldn’t eat. Even if you did have cows you would need grass, which it is raining for eight years straight. If that even was possible it would be hard to live, almost impossible to live like that.

I know the author did write a good short story, but it would be better if they included more details. He could have included how they lived, what they ate, how did they get food and what they did. I know the author can improve his story.